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Pulp Fiction

Picking Nits

Absent police; rectangle; boxing; gun prints; gag breathing; bullet holes; Marsellus escape; diner continuity

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  • The apartment shooting and hostage departure draw no police; uneven LAPD attention is offered, but the script’s yuppie setting complicates that defense.
  • Mia draws a rectangle rather than a square.
  • A 210-pound opponent makes Butch a heavyweight, which seems physically implausible for Willis.
  • Butch’s modest apartment seems inconsistent with a Ring cover and headline fight; gambling and poor money management are possible explanations, with disagreement about his success.
  • A brief tissue wipe seems inadequate for removing gun fingerprints, especially leaving the gun behind.
  • Breathing with a broken nose and ball gag is questioned.
  • Bullet holes are visible before the shots are fired.
  • Marsellus suddenly has his gag removed, pants up and restraints gone without a visible rescue; the staging is challenged.
  • The bathroom gunman missing every shot is questioned, with divine intervention offered as the film’s answer.
  • Honey Bunny’s differing dialogue is disputed as a mistake versus deliberate perspective or surrealism; same-day filming strengthens the intentionality argument for some.
  • The prolonged diner robbery attracts neither customers nor police; the difficulty of controlling multiple restaurant areas is noted.