Picking Nits
Pat friendship; apartment painting; light continuity; diner financing; character ages.
Additional sports, wardrobe, and workplace objections are retained in the findings.
In the discussion (9)
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- Debbie continuing to socialize with Pat after Pat pursues Danny is challenged.
- Danny’s hostile reaction to Debbie painting the apartment is challenged.
- The breakup scene’s light continuity is challenged.
- Danny’s ability to finance and open the diner is challenged.
- Danny’s claim to have spent his life in restaurant-supply sales is challenged because he is about 24.
- A sentimental cloth left on the kitchen table is criticized as an implausible place for an item that must stay clean.
- Danny’s wardrobe and narrow Chicago-sports interests are questioned.
- The omitted basketball game is identified as a missing chance to establish Danny and Bernie’s playing roles.
- Debbie’s boss pursuing her so openly is challenged as inconsistent with her response.